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Re: The Banished God-Short Story (Warning: Long)
I am back, as promised. So let's get back to where I left off. “Why the pleasure of mine, of course!” The Hillsman laughed. I think you meant to say ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: The Banished God-Short Story (Warning: Long)
First of all, I just want to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. Your descriptions are very detailed and I often felt like I was actually in ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: So You Want to Rule the World?
This was hilarious!! So I didn't read too much of the other reviews, but it looked like Master Yoda did a good job. However, I am going to review this, ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: Dreams of Giants -- Chapter 3, Part 1
I know this review is WAY overdue, and I do apologize for the long delay. My internet has been shut off for several months, but it is back in commission. ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Lost Hope [1]
I just happened to stumble upon this piece and I am so glad I did. It is FANTASTIC. However, I do have several suggestions. The Holy Grail pub was smoky ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Rapid Reviews
Okay, well I'm all caught up on reviews. Just remember people, I cannot review anything that is in a usergroup forum. In order for me to comment on anything in ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Deliverance: Prologue
Okay, so I'll get the little nitpicky stuff out of the way first. Then I'll cover stuff like character development, description of the setting, and my overall opinion on the ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: Rapid Reviews
I am mostly caught up on everyone's requests for reviews. Emmy I was able to critique both of your poems, but I was a little short on time so I ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: Alone
Again, I'm not very good at critiquing poetry, but I'm finding the more I do it for you, the more enjoyable it becomes. All the same this is going to ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: The Mansion chapter 5
I'm trying to raise my point count since it just got reset to 300. = ( Anywho, I'm going to be brief and rather frank so please do not be ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: Dreams of Giants -- Chapter Two, Part Two
A gentle roar seemed to hold the Southern Dock hostage. It was abnormally busy, and people were scattered in all directions. I love the way you open a chapter, always ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: Haikus
I'm not very good at critiquing poetry, so I apologize, I guess I should have stated that. My favorite poems were #2 and #5. I liked the approach you took ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: The mansion chapter 4
It was a dark night, one of the darkest of them all. It is on this kind of nights when these things happen. We moved through the night as silently ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: The Mansion Chapter 3
I didn't get a chance to read what everyone else wrote, so you'll have to forgive me if I repeat something that has already been covered. Shall we? People never ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: The Mansion Chapter 3
I didn't get a chance to read what everyone else wrote, so you'll have to forgive me if I repeat something that has already been covered. Shall we? People never ...
Apr 9, 2009
